I recently accepted a challenge created by one of my twitter friends called 30 in 30. The idea is to write/post a new poem every day for 30 days. This promises to be very interesting for me seeing as how I've been going through some personal struggles as of late. At any rate, here's my first offering...
Gone
I really need you
My head and heart are hurting
I can't stop hurting
Grasping hands let go
Warm eyes suddenly go cold
Love lives here no more
2 comments:
Much solemn sincerities given to you and yours. The physical loss of your elder is only trumped by the recognition that her spirit is still alive and kicking with the memory of her by you :) Nice haiku.
humbled by your strength! seelinewoman
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